…Suddenly All The Lights Went Out…100WC Week 21

It was a normal day in our house. Busy as can be… Not really… I live alone, in a tiny cottage in the middle of the woods, with only one neighbour… The old ghost house. I never get any luck. My mum hated me so she forced me to stay in this old haunted cottage. Every day I get more and more scared…

‘I WISH I COULD MOVE TO A NORMAL HOUSE’ I screamed…

…Suddenly All The Lights Went Out…

‘Why did I say that?!’

Then the lights started to flash…

Goosebumps started to crawl up my spine…

Then I saw a shadow…

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

 

By Gemma

One thought on “…Suddenly All The Lights Went Out…100WC Week 21

  1. Hi Gemma,

    Your story had some good vocabulary…’busy as can be’, ‘tiny cottage’, ‘old ghost house’, ‘old haunted cottage’ and ‘Goosebumps started to crawl up my spine’. I wondered about your neighbour living in an old ghost house and you living in a haunted cottage. A bit too spooky maybe? Nice use of talking marks and capital letters. Keep up the good work!

    From Ms Fitzgerald

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