Suddenly all the lights went out – 100WC Week 21

I was stuck in the thick dark forest, and if I didn’t have the sun I could be dead right now and I really don’t want to die. I am so glad I still have the BOOM!!!Yikes!!! The sun exploded  everything is dark and gloomy and I can’t see a thing  BOOM!!! BOOM!!!BOOM The sun keeps on exploding and comes back up again somehow and again and again and there are about 483 suns, its so hot that I die and wake up and realise that the booms was just my alarm clock and I woke up in my cosy bed.

By Joseph

 

One thought on “Suddenly all the lights went out – 100WC Week 21

  1. Hi Joseph,

    You have used some great vocabulary in this piece of writing ‘thick dark forest’, ‘exploded’, ‘BOOM!’, ‘dark and gloomy’. However I found your story a bit too far fetched! Could the sun keep exploding and then you have 483 suns? Remember you were meant to use the words ‘suddenly all the lights went out’ in your story. Also your writing should be in past tense but we will work further on this, this week.

    From Ms Fitzgerald

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