…the noise was SO loud…100WC Week 20

I woke up in the middle of the night hearing elephants trumping, dogs barking and loud music playing. I dashed to my parent’s room and angrily said ”THE NOISE IS SO LOUD!”

They said in a tired voice to ignore the noise so I did what they said and try to sleep but that irritating noise kept on bothering me! I looked out the window and couldn’t see a thing? Was it because the sky was pitch black and I couldn’t see a thing. I went to my older sister’s room and she, and my other sister and the dog were making the turbulence!


By Liam


2 thoughts on “…the noise was SO loud…100WC Week 20

  1. Hi Liam,

    Your writing was really good. I really liked the verb ‘trumping’, the noun ‘turbulence’ and the adjective ‘irritating’. They are great words! Maybe try not to repeat yourself, e.g couldn’t see a thing.

    From Ms Fitzgerald & 3/4L

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