School Disco – 100WC Week 20

One day I was at a school disco with my friends we were having so much fun then the music started it was a bit loud but I kept on going till 9 o’clock at night when they turned the music so high I got an ear infection then I fell asleep it was a long sleep but I  kept on sleeping zzzzzzzzzzzzz I woke up in a doctor it was very strange my mum said “ that music was too loud for you” she said. So we took you here I was about to my last word but I fell asleep…

by Luca

3 thoughts on “School Disco – 100WC Week 20

  1. Hi Luca!

    I liked your story but next time you should put more full stops because there is only one in your story.

    From Anthony

  2. Gday luca

    your story was very good. i liked it because it has that scary theme to it. hears some cold feedback you should put more full stops in your story because when i read it only had 1 full stop. but overall it was great mate.

    by Oscar ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

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